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<I lost a book>
I lost a book which I borrowed from the library. 2weeks ago, I borrowed 8books from there. Yesterday was the return due date. After I returned them, I tried to borrow new books. But the librarian told me that I didn't return a book, so I couldn't borrow new books. I thought that I had returned every book that I had borrowed. I didn't check if it was 8 or 7 because I have to return them very quickly At that time, I suggested to her "Could I return these books first and then I measure the temperature because these are heavy" so I returned them very quickly The book doesn't exist at my home and my mom's car. I don't know where it is.

캠블리 Nicky Davids 튜터에게 수정을 받았는데 작문 수업에는 비추
수업시간이 30분이었는데 10분 정도만 작문수정하고 일상대화를 더 많이했다
굉장히 친절하고 캠블리 회화목적으로 처음하는 사람에게는 추천하는 튜터임

캠블리 3주차

여튼 첫 번째 고친 결과
2 weeks > two weeks 숫자 말고 단어로 쓰기
두 번째 문장은 바뀐 게 맞는지 모르겠다 2주 전에 거기서 8권 빌렸다는 말을 하고 싶은데 when이 들어가야 하는건가?
every book > all the books
8 or 7 > 7 or 8
suggest > ask
책에 exist 쓰지 말기
didn't > haven't

I lost a book

I lost a book which I borrowed from the library.
two weeks ago, When I borrowed 8books from there.
Yesterday was the due date to return the books. When I returned them and tried to borrow new books.
The librarian told me that I haven't returned a book, so I couldn't borrow new books.
I thought that I had returned all the books that I had borrowed.
I didn't check if it was 7 or 8 because I have to return them very quickly
At that time, I asked her If she could measure my temperature after I return the books because the books were heavy
so I returned them very quickly
The book isn't at my home and my mom's car.
I don't know where it is.

다음 작문수업은 Alex Cameron 튜터에게 들을 것
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